Well, since I received glowing reviews on my last elevator pitch, I thought I would switch things up and try a different approach. I lost the hat, wore a button up (and black pants, though you can't see them) and trimmed my pitch to 60 seconds. It's not as dynamic, but it's clean. I think in an ideal world I could combine the two, maybe cut down the time and pitch of my first attempt but keep the personality. I like bringing my energy and creativity to the business, and the subdued version, while it has merit, is more mainstream.
Kelly, This is definitely the best elevator pitch I have seen so far. You speak steadily with confidence and sound very educated. I also loved how you added statistics, that is the first time I have seen that. I think you have a great idea, that is an untapped market, and I'm sure there is a lot of potential for an idea like this. I don't really have any criticism to give you other than it was very well done! When you get a chance, take a look at mine as well: https://principlesofentrepreneurship.wordpress.com/2016/02/17/elevator-pitch-no-2/ Good luck!
You sound like you know what you're talking about. One thing is that it seems like you remembered your pitch but there's a need to show some more emotion to what you are pitching. Maybe hand gestures or tone shift. Other than that your idea seems fantastic! Good luck and here's my elevator pitch: http://notimportantrightnow.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Kelly, You have demonstrated that you know your pitch well and have strong supporting evidence behind your idea. Regarding the pitch, I do see a lot of potential in your market and believe the proper execution will yield encouraging results. For constructive feedback, I believe if you capture your entire body in the video you have the power to be more expressive and engaging for the audience. Nonetheless, solid work on your pitch and I wish you the best of luck in your journey.
I have attached the link to my pitch and would love your feedback.
Kelly,
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely the best elevator pitch I have seen so far. You speak steadily with confidence and sound very educated. I also loved how you added statistics, that is the first time I have seen that. I think you have a great idea, that is an untapped market, and I'm sure there is a lot of potential for an idea like this. I don't really have any criticism to give you other than it was very well done! When you get a chance, take a look at mine as well:
https://principlesofentrepreneurship.wordpress.com/2016/02/17/elevator-pitch-no-2/
Good luck!
You sound like you know what you're talking about. One thing is that it seems like you remembered your pitch but there's a need to show some more emotion to what you are pitching. Maybe hand gestures or tone shift. Other than that your idea seems fantastic! Good luck and here's my elevator pitch: http://notimportantrightnow.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteKelly,
ReplyDeleteYou have demonstrated that you know your pitch well and have strong supporting evidence behind your idea. Regarding the pitch, I do see a lot of potential in your market and believe the proper execution will yield encouraging results. For constructive feedback, I believe if you capture your entire body in the video you have the power to be more expressive and engaging for the audience. Nonetheless, solid work on your pitch and I wish you the best of luck in your journey.
I have attached the link to my pitch and would love your feedback.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Best of Luck,
Louis DiPaolo Jr